HW - 19 Big Paper 1 suggestions (Julie)

I think your paper looks really strong. What I think you are getting at with the danger of too much digital overload is the addictive nature of it, especially for teenagers. I think that is maybe the most important insight we can have on this subject and that it should be part of your thesis right up front. I think that is really what you are doing. You are also building a good case about the danger for our society if we keep on this overload course. Good job